Liam Writing Sample T4.2017

The  referee is not always right

Hi my name is Liam and the referee is not always right because I have been a referee and I make bad calls.

But when you are not the referee you think they are a bad referee but they are doing their best. But I have to admit that I don’t like some referee.

Like in the soccer final  a team scored a goal to make it even but the referee called no goal because the referee was standing  somewhere where he couldn’t see. The bad thing about being a referee is that kwon one notes the good things but they notes the bad things.

Also in league there was a player about to score a try but the other team stript it and the referee called a knock on and my dad was angry.

And I get angry but you got to think that if you were the referee you would make bad calls and people will get angry at you. So when you  think about it if you didn’t have any referees there would be no games to watch. Because the referees run the game and try to make it fear and without referees it will be worse because the referees make like 4 bad calls but when there are no referee there will be heaps of bad calls because there will be known one to run the game so it be no rules.

So what I am trying to say is The  referee is not always right and they are doing there best and if you don’t like any referee do it yourself and you will know what it feels like to get abused and don’t want to referee any more so next time you see a referee make a bad call don’t go mad at him.

bird of the year

nuclear free nz

What happened: In 1985 1st of march David lange got invited to the oxford union for a debate

What he said:David lange does not want to have nothing nuclear new zealand starting from 1987

There legastration encompanes to intail the stance of an opposing a weapons of mase destruction

All countries have a silent treaty and that is a known fact

Another reason why there is no nuclear power in nz because people will get diseases and die

Proposed Haast/Hollyford Road social studies

Writing From Different Perspective


why is this road being built. It is being built so people don’t have to travel so far and it will be a good road to drive.      

How much will money will they need to do it. They need 2b


What will be good about it: That families will be able to have better picnics and be able to travel around the south island faster and FINALLY get some good fish and people will be able to get to the lake quicker and a better / smoother road there and it will get haast some more customers

The road is going through haast to milford sound

Things that a similar but worse: Well 230m is a lot of money and our parents will have to pay for it because of tax but atleast they are spending it on something good like instead of a flag we are getting a new road that more people will use than a flag, I reckon this is a good idea because more people will use it instead of just looking at a flag.

Smart Goals

1985 Sinking Of The Rainbow Warrior

Writin From Different Perspective

Peace No War you're in our NZ Territory we want a nuclear free world. We don't want you coming into New Zealand  

And you testing all of your nuclear bombs when New Zealand do not want any trouble we don’t want you french to come into New Zealand and start testing all your nuclear bombs you could hit our land nuclear also makes people sick we do not want you entering New Zealand with all of your Nuclear Bombs.A Female French Agent goes under the the Rainbow Warrior Secretly and put a Carbon and C4 bombs on the Hull of the Rainbow Warrior. Not knowing that there were people on the Rainbow Warrior because it was in the Auckland Harbor and it was in the middle of the night. Now the reason the french bombed the Rainbow Warrior was because Green Peace kept coming to the Testing sight and protesting and basicly they thought if the boat is blown up they have no boat to come to protest. When the french spies blew up the rainbow warrior they also thought that there was no one on the ship and there happened to be 4 people on the ship. Which cause two people on the Rainbow Warrior to Die Cause of Drowning and because of the explosion

It was in 1985 in auckland harbour the rainbow warrior was making peace for nuclear weapons        

The person that bombed the boat was christine

Carbon and they used c4 to blow up the rainbow warriors and one person died.

1981 springbok tour

Held at: Rugby park hamilton (Waikato Stadium)

How it started: the Springbok said the coloured people can’t play because they didn't want to touch the black people because they're that racist

What they were doing: they got a plane and made it circled the park and where dropping smoke bombs flour bombs and flares and one of the flour bomb hit gary knight and made him fall

How did New Zealand break the rules: They broke the rules because the commonwealth countries were not supposed to play the any south african teams

How one the game that was interrupted: The springbok was down by one 18-19 with 15 minutes left but the game got cancelled caused of Smoke bombs, flares, and lots of other violence, it got too dangerous for the players one of them got hit in the head by a bomb. So they stopped the game and the teams went into the changing room with a final score of 18-19.